tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945478599277520116.post8017461328419280728..comments2010-01-09T07:56:52.991-08:00Comments on Plamena's Blog: Welcome to Tunisia!Plamyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18196015855132154284noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945478599277520116.post-15586485560459908072010-01-05T07:25:46.569-08:002010-01-05T07:25:46.569-08:00Thank you, guys, for your comments. I will conside...Thank you, guys, for your comments. I will consider your remarks. :) <br /><br />Teddy, unfortunately not only one but several Tunisians stopped and asked me this stupid question. :D It was very comic! :DPlamyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18196015855132154284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945478599277520116.post-79019701609810045132010-01-04T03:45:31.301-08:002010-01-04T03:45:31.301-08:00Plami, you have succeeded to express you awe from ...Plami, you have succeeded to express you awe from Tunisia; the reader can really sense your anticipation and excitement. Reading it, I could picture you entering the hotel and signing. <br /><br />It is a very well written travel narrative. It is concise and describes various observations. Also, I liked the comparisons you have made (ex. the fairytale palace). <br />You can try to enrich your vocabulary even more, so that you find words even for “indescribable” experiences. <br /><br />I also think you could have described some more details that have made you a particular impression, especially if they are something that have astounded only you (though I realize you cannot feature many of them in 400 words). <br /><br />Keep writing about your traveling experiences! As memories fade, only those written on paper will endure ;) <br /><br />P.S. Did a Tunisian stop you and asked you to marry him? :DTeodorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05496092999493820952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6945478599277520116.post-25917872441303105582009-12-06T22:20:49.483-08:002009-12-06T22:20:49.483-08:00Plami, your piece is amazing. It is really refresh...Plami, your piece is amazing. It is really refreshing to read positive travel writing. Your use of metaphors and comparisons has contributed to the cohesiveness and the flow of your piece. You tend to delve into details about places and destinations but not about their nature. If you want to enhance your piece just a little bit,you should try to be more descriptive. Other than that, your piece is perfect;to be honest, I want to go to Tunisia now:)Vassil Stefanovhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09902900467148264077noreply@blogger.com